One night i went out for a night walk in the night i walk past a house spooky house i wanted to look back so i did there was the house but this time it was flying when i looked under the house there was a bright light as the house then the house landed as the house landed something pushed me into the bright light when i looked back there was nothing but i was in a cave. When i looked ford there was the light so i walked towards it i would ran but my legs heart on the way there were tow paths one candy path the next path was a spooky and scary path so i took the candy path one the way i ate some of the candy but some of the candy was good as i got past the candy path there was the light when i go close and closer AAA To be continued...
To Manaia
ReplyDeleteI like your story because I like the way you said but this time it was flying.
Next time put more adjectives in your story.
From Adelei
I would have taken the candy path, too! What is your favorite kind of candy?
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