Lost in a corn
field
One day I went to the corn maze with my friend Emily. We packed our bags and went. As
we got further into the maze we found gold. It was as shiny as the sun and as
gold as the corn in the corn field. The next row had 10 chickens. They looked like they were going to bite us so we past them. We saw one BIG BIG monster on the next row so we ran
past him. Next was one, two, three BIG chocolate cakes so we took a plate and munched
it on the way. Then we noticed we were trapped! AAAhhhhh! Emily and I screamed. There
was a big shiny light... to be continued...
Hi Manaia
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story! To see so many things in one trip to a corn maze is quite something. I wonder what would have happened if you hadn't eaten the chocolate? I hope we get to find out what happens next!
Well done.
Freya
Team 100WC
To Freya
DeleteThank you for the comment.
If we hadn't aten it we wont have enogh enegey to get out.
From Manaia.